Friday, October 24, 2014
name poem
My first name is Keith I am one of the four Keith's in my family. Keith means descending warrior. I like this meaning because I feel like I am a fighter and a warrior. This definition fits with who I am, one who won't give up without a fight. The reason my parents named me Keith was because my fathers name is Keith and he named my oldest brother Keith after him. Then when my second brother was born his middle name was supposed to be Keith and when he got his birth certificate filled out my parents accidentally wrote Keith as his first. So when I came along my parents thought oh well they can't leave me out. Therefore,When I was born I also got the name Keith. My middle name is Deshawn which means god is gracious. The reason I was given my middle name "Deshawn" wasn't really for a specific reason my parents just overall liked the name. But I do very much like my names and wouldn't change them or anything about them because in my opinion their what make me, me. Personally without my name I think I'd be like a person without a thought process, lost but with my name it's how I'm able to find out who I really am.
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This is very family serious and they describe you unlike anything else
ReplyDeleteYou used Keith a lot but nice job. I've always wondered why there were so many Keith's ! 😁
ReplyDeleteI love the meaning ...you have great warrior traits and it's very unique how you got your name i loved it go boy ayeeee KD4
ReplyDeleteGreat job Keith, I believe you forgot your poetic devices though
ReplyDeleteI dig it bro, good job.
ReplyDeleteThis is really deep and I love the fact that even though you have the same name as everyone in your house you're still proud of it.
ReplyDeleteI said almost the same thing... except my name is different. Cool poem! ;)
ReplyDeleteKeith,
ReplyDeleteGreat job. This is a great improvement from what you were working on last week. This is an excellent response to the assignment and clearly explains the history of your name.
I like how you are still proud of your name even though your brothers have it. You still look at your name as a reflection of your personality.
ReplyDeleteI think it's funny that all of you and your brothers have the same name but it makes you all alike. I like the meaning of your name and I'm glad you take pride in it.
ReplyDeleteI like this because even though you name is Keith and your whole family is Keith your still your own unique person. You have a very special family and you should be very proud to be 1 in 4 Keith's in your family :)))
ReplyDeleteI love how your name or should I say your father and brothers' names is mentioned as a family history
ReplyDeleteYou should check over for missing commas. Other than that, it's good. l think it's kinda funny that you're all named Keith.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described how you and your brother were named Keith. It gave us an inside look on what your name means to you and your family.
ReplyDeleteI like how your parents said hey lets not leave him out of it. That's kind of cool how your all named Keith. I like how you said your name identifies you even if others have your name.
ReplyDeleteI like how u explain us that you your brother and other brother have the same name and were it came from
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